Maturity can be seen in the writing here which makes it much better than most originals or translated stories on this site. The plot for now is going at a satisfactory pace and seems well thought of. Characters show personality and places and characters have been described well which hardly can be said for most works here. For now this is a fantasy novel with revenge plot plus a boy growing up tale and I have quite enjoyed the setting and the story from what I've read till now. This is a 'Hidden gem' I would say and deserves to get more attention. Good luck to the author and I hope he sees it through and finishes it. Definitely his best work yet.
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