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The author tries to get technical and it's hurts.... there's a lot of semi sci-fi tech in the novel but the author doesn't really know what some of it is. Like lazer is just light and plasma is a separate form of matter but it doesn't matter much, it's a novel. Otherwise, as far as I've read, it's a decent web novel. Tons of English errors but lol it's on web novel.com Some other things is like how the author tries to create plot progression but he makes some plot holes instead, a little cringe but that's fine.