Review Detail of NONYA in Naruto System Within Naruto

I didn't get that far, I kept reading because I thought it was a differnt naruto fan fiction that I was looking for but less than thirty chapters in, though I had realized at some point it wasn't the right one, the concept and ideas of this novel were something I though could be really great if done right.. But, look again, this novel just has too many flaws, and outright instances and entire dynamics that ruin the whole novel entirely. reading the reviews of the other readers, I can say that not only the novel, the author is an incredibly fucked up individual. I have no desire to read more on my own and if you do read it, I hope you don't give it ant sick because of th concept as mind you, he was fucking that up too.