Review Detail of DeJeL in So What If I'm a Summoner Who Only Wants Fluffy Creatures?

*Remember, this review is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: For me, it was hard to get past the first chapter, because it felt like a monologue style information dump... better than just a pure info dump, but hard for me to keep reading past. Positive Feedback: You did well in how you wrote... the development of your story and characters... and on the background of the world. Also, you sped up the pace of the story like a snowball rolling down a mountain.;,;. Personal Feedback: Like said above, I struggled to get past the beginning, but I'm glad I did, you made a really good story here that I will continue to read.;,;.