Review Detail of Froschmo in So What If I'm a Summoner Who Only Wants Fluffy Creatures?

Yo, fro here~~~!!! This is interesting, an old man get a chance to experience excitement again lol. Its so funny reading his thought when he was just summoned to another world. Its logical and make sense, but at the same time so comical. You should add more old man features in the story, like his habit as old man, complaining about back ache, but realized that wasnt there anymore. The flow of story was too rushing I think, because I felt like the story was about to end when the demon champion appeared, but it is okay since the story started at a war. It is exciting to see battle immediately in the story. Just world background was still abit vague, the demon things, like where they came from hadnt been explained clearly, though it is still early chap, so maybe it will slowly unravel later. The game system, like the skill is okay, but Im still confused about MC's class, he was summoner but can buff like an enchanter? Should the buff more for his familiar instead? Overall this story has good beginning, the narrative also easy to read, just the grammar is still a bit bad, you mixed the past tense and present tense, better use one consistently instead. Well, this story has good potential, keep the hard work!