Review Detail of AoDlightwolf in

So after reading a few chapters the grammar needs work and the story at the start and through out is structured in a way that leaves much to be desired and it is often repetitive. Also what's with people spamming 1 stars on the rateing and people complaining it's now pay to read and other people complaining about them so they give it 5 stars. I mean I have **** grammar when typing but the sentence flow is kinda messed up in the novel I'll prob continue reading it to see if it gets better.