Great fic potential but was ruin bY going with griffindor. following cannon harry and lame ron. lots of filler rUbbish. Dunno about the whole back story that dont hold for MC and the memory lost. it just dont flow well.
SykoNex
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LIKEI mean it's apparent you're a 20 chapter Andy but looking at your past reviews I have to ask. What is wrong with you? lol none of your reviews have any critical thought or actually insightful opinions. You say too much filler on like everything. Have you even read a real book? obviously not since then you would know the difference between fluff and filler. Find better things in life man. I hope things get better for you.