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Review Detail of Xrvds in Reaper (Being Re-written)

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Xrvds
XrvdsLv134yrXrvds

I liked it until he started acting like a child. Good job on the chapters leading up to those. But I just find the childish stuff unneeded and poisonous to your story.

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Reaper (Being Re-written)

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Mynner
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Think of it this way he had an abusive father and never had a childhood and also he never had a motherly figure until the auntie later on