The story started strong but dropped fast into the unreadable. The author intoduced intressting elements like dungon bulding or the take over of an empire with a rebellion. These elements are used briefly but get thrown away fast. For example. Hey i want to build a dungeon. The first floor is this. The second floor is this. And the remaining 1000 floors are ****. Now he has his 1000 floor dungeon and it gets never used. No raid no nothings. And 10 chapters after the dungeon is complet it gets destroyed and the MC doesnt care. It is a cluster of intressting elements who are used bad. The story jumps from one thing into the other and the reader has no nice flow to read.
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