Item: The Unknown Beauty
Rating: 1.8
Author: Aicha_Hamidou

Aicha_HamidouLv55yr

2019-12-14 18:47

I really wish I enjoyed this story more than I do. But the pacing, poor grammer and sentence srructure deters from an overall good story.😦😦😦😦😦😦😦😦😦

The Unknown Beauty

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