Review Detail of Lobo_Curioso in The Demon Against the Heavens
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no sé ---- tu historia parece una combinación entre trama de Japón Shonen e historia China de varios cultivos. pero en vez de explicar mejor; llenas de trama en charla .............. .......... .......... ........... ............ me gusta que pase cosas cada cierto tiempo bajo cierta modalidad. en el cine, te das cuenta que la modalidad es lo que hace interesante la historia. cada pequeña toma de algo minucioso que lo hace distinto a otro.
The Demon Against the Heavens
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muchas gracias por la revisión, since we're Italian we can understand a lot of spanish words and I even studied it a little bit. The story will not go the traditional way of jap/chinese novels, rest assured. I'm sorry for the heavy and slow flashbacks in the first 45 chapters; they were necessary to polish our skills and learn how to manage the time-flow. Now we're much more comfortable with these and I think they'll be fundamental for a very immersive experience. We're working on side-stories too. But y'all are not going to see them until chapter 280-285