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Xboxgorgo18
Xboxgorgo18Lv76yr
2018-09-14 08:11

Hmm, overall this fanfic seems interesting. A calculative MC that doesn't want to stand out at the very beginning with the necessary wished ability to show for it. He doesn't seem like the shameless "I WILL STAND AT THE TOP OF THE WORLD" typr which is rather rare. It's still too early to decide whether the development is great or not but otherwise good luck with your writing and try to make the situation as consistent as possible so that the story will make sense.

Dropped cuz the idea was dumb, and I can't delete it.

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jesusguero25
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NeoBee
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000Striker000
000Striker000Lv6

What do you think the next wish should be??? 🤔🤨🧐 1. Plot armour 2. System 3. Doujutsu (possibly all) 4. Kekkai genkai/tota 5. Absolute control (chakra/mind/body/element)

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Translating_Finger
Translating_FingerLv14

Hello, Author. From the 2 chapters that I have currently read it seems that you have the potential to make quite a popular fan-fiction if you put your time into it. The only reason that I have currently decided to give you 3 stars in "Stability of updates, story development and character design" is due to the fact that we have yet to see more about that. I will change my review depending on how the story turns out during the next 10 chapters. Remember to keep the updates somewhat consistent and to add some tags, people usually look at the tags before reading, including myself.

6yr
LReMi
LReMiLv5

Lakukan di battle thought the heaven ,, againts the god ,, atau tales of demon and god,,,, itu beberapa novel yang ku sukai,,,, More,,,,more,,,more More,,,,more,,,more More,,,,more,,,more More,,,,more,,,more

6yr
saqi143
saqi143Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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anger
angerLv11

The description and cover looked good, I was finally happy I would find something that would ease my mind that’s a good book that’s not terrible like Naruto and one piece. It was good so far looked pretty good not to op then guess what he chose NARUTO like legit, so overused and such a terrible anime....

6yr
Ove1230
Ove1230Lv12

Just what I was looking for you had to know the the wish gerne is my favorite the writing style is perfect word placement is good and grammer is even better thank you very much

6yr
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