It's a great story with an interesting premise and wonderful world build and interesting characters. The only reason I can't give it a full five stars is because of the amount of writing mistakes. Honestly it's not bad enough to distract much from the story even if the are annoying. Really all the author needs to do is have somebody proof read each chapter before posting them and 90% of the problem would probably be solved. As for the updates I'd love to see a chapter a day but the author does do a good job with the amount of detail in the story and frankly I rather have that than more chapters with less detail so I'm willing to over look it.
Liked it!
LIKE
Thanks for the review, and I agree with needing a proofreader. There's a funny thing with writing where you miss obvious mistakes because in your brain they aren't there.
whats happening with your other novel ? dropped ?
I out storm caller in hiatus for a while, I was unhappy with how I did some things and wanted to go over the whole story to try and learn from it. When I have some time I’m working on it still but I won’t be posting any chapters until I have a good handle on it. You have to understand that this is the first time I’ve written anything and showed it to people so it’s been a massive learning experience.
Ok, just you didn’t say anything so people though you dropped, which would have been a shame since it a good one, though I like this one too (not as much, be too)
