Review Detail of FrayWalker in Legacy: Lord Alba

The story is great and all but its just sad that the grammar and the writing is trash its even hard to believe that this has an editor because of how much of a headache reading this is and reading this story sometimes confuses me as it not only confuses nouns, verbs, and even adjectives. Also the POV's also has a lot of work that needs to be done for example you show a convo of the MC and a girl as "he took a item out of nowhere " when you are describing the point of view of the girl. Im sorry if some doesnt understand this but im not that good at explaining things in written texts