Review Detail of immortalnoob in The Damro Killer

Hey, it’s me, immortalnoob and I’m here to just say that this novel is only for fun and I hope that anyone and everyone who reads this, can feel some sort of emotion from my writing. If you feel anything, then that means my work here is done and I can quit... Nah just joking, I would never quit out of nowhere. At most, this novel will be on hiatus, so don’t worry about it getting dropped. I’ll try to increase the quality of my chapters as fast and as efficiently as possible(Great if people can review my work and point out my pros and cons).