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It was supposed to be a great story, but the MC is very dumb and does not enjoy what he has, and worse came from a modern age and he seems very *****, and to make matters worse he says a good person and decides very fast to take a life even though NEET was previously isolated by persecution (as a coward may have a life-long resolve). To make matters worse he will be targeted to be engaged to growers but stronger than himself, and even then he goes to a place that anyone could say goes the **** (anyone would ask the cultivation levels of the world and especially where is going, but he does not ...) the system seems to have a great knowledge of the world, but MC does not ask anything useful to him. He said he read a lot of novels, but he does not even know what dual cultivation is, and to pamper he was in a perfect place to stay strong, but what he does (he leaves the place to go to a dangerous place, especially for him, cultivation too high for their own age, even being 3 times more difficult to grow). My view of the MC * super idiot Observation> The novel has many cliches, and much repetition of phrases and information making it very repetitive. The initial idea of ​​the novel is very good and needs a lot of revision and also a touch of realism, mainly psychological of the MC.

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I could not say anything better than this.