Review Detail of West in The All-Around System

Reading the first paragraph of chapter 1 had me want to drop asap, skipping to chapter 40 cemented my decision. Rating 1 star. Chapters lack depth, no descriptive writing at all other then basic stuff, lacking in details and most important the story has no flow. I felt this was a creation of a ten year old, the very first paragraph was so lacking and held the most basic description of the main character it was boring.