Review Detail of DeJeL in In The Name of GOD

**Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters** Constructive Criticism: I suggest you edit the following from chapter 1 "That smile would scare would stop a baby from crying and scare any kind of criminal on death row", honestly IDK how to best go about correcting this, but it is crazy confusing for us native English speakers.;,;. You went 3 weeks w/o an update earlier on after your update rate average seemed to be no more than a week or two apart, and then you have not updated in the last two months? I feel you should try your best to keep this story going and make your updates happen at a regular pace.;,;. I feel both your characters and world background are a bit week, the characters feel like they were taken out of a video game such as Minecraft, whereas the character does not have much of a story of it's own.;,;. Positive Feedback: I feel like your story development is strong despite all your weaknesses... I just hope you can strengthen your strengths and learn from so to strengthen your weaknesses.;,;. Personal Feedback: I'm sorry, but this story is not my cup of tea... I will not be continuing to read this novel, I however will implore you to keep up the good work for the sake of your fans.;,;. Score: SoU 3/5 SD 5/5 Rest 4/5