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Review Detail of Lomyril in System Programmer

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Lomyril
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This definitely isn't your run-of-the-mill summoning story. It's good enough that I've just now purchased the author's work on Amazon for Kindle. I think that makes this the first novel here on Webnovel I've bought to support the author's work. (That takes the novel to chapter 39 on Kindle). The writing quality is excellent, story development is logical and consistent, character design of the main characters are believable and the world background is very intriguing. The world background, in particular, has a sense of mystery and danger that sets it apart from most other "I have a reincarnated in another world with a system" stories. The only minor flaws of this novel are that the chapter releases have become a bit erratic, and some of the side characters could use more fleshing out. I'd like to see more interaction between the main characters and their adventuring party, for example. Sitting down at the campfire, exploring personal histories or telling stories... that kind of thing while not necessary to the main story, could help us relate to the supporting cast. In the end, I decided to purchase this book and support the author because I am really enjoying the story. I'd like to read more and see how the relationships develop as the main characters understand more about their world and each other.

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