Review Detail of HavenlyJeep in Slayer of Kings

- The story is slow-paced, but in a good way. However, there's not much to be found in each individual chapters, as Leo currently stays in one place with no interesting development YET. - Leo, as a character, has a distinct personality. He does what he wants, and seems to be exude a bit of an Anti-Hero vibe to him. The other characters seem to be less interesting. - I like the descriptions the author used to describe the surroundings. Enough to get the readers know where and what he's doing. *Just a suggestion, ignore it if you want: -- I think you need to add more suspense and ******* into the chapters. Add more stakes and conflicts. Because in the initial chapters, there's not much of a hook for the readers to get invested into the story.