Review Detail of DeJeL in I Was Reincarnated Into A Harem Game As A Villain, Please Stay Away I'm Gay!

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Predictable... after reading the title and synopsis, I was able to predict the general path of the story for the first 3.5 chapters... I guess adding the system was the only thing you did I didn't expect. I'd suggest trying to add more curve-balls into the mix.;,;. Positive Feedback: In every area, I did not mention, I feel you did well. Personal Feedback: I did enjoy the fact that you did not treat the MC's homosexuality as the core of the novel, even though it's in the name... but the plot is really not my cup of tea... however, in the process of reviewing your novel, I helped you gain another fan..... so don't let your fans down, and make sure to complete your novel.;,;.