*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: None for the first 5 chapters, but I looked over the updates, and they seem a bit sporadic, I'd suggest coming up with a schedule you believe you can stick to, and then just putting out that many chapters regardless of if you happen to have extras. (I am doing exactly that, with one a week) Positive Feedback: Strong start, and I like how smooth the transition was to the new world, I just hope to see more about her past in the near future.;,;. Personal Feedback: I likely started this novel for a review swap, however, I will keep it in my library to continue later.;,;. keep up the good work.;,;.
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