Review Detail of KingGeorg in Knight in Another World (Complete)

I really don’t like giving bad scores but I think the writer is doing a good job but simply should rewrite everything based on its base idea. Thus rethinking where this story is supposed to be going, what kind of story it is supposed to be e.g. . The main problem, I see is that besides having a unique and eye catching backstory ...all the rest of the story is more or less some sort of slice of life that flows somewhat aimlessly. There is nothing like a red thread to me or an arch that spans from the beginning to the end of the story. For example this dude is madly in love with a girl ...and then tam tam tam finds her basically on the first day. That’s an opportunity missed. It could have been an arch in itself ...telling how to survive in a foreign environment while having spotted the girl on the beginning but then loose her due to the inability to cope with the modern world ..maybe even being chased for displaying magic, search for her,and in the end find her. Also a question is what results bringing magic to our world could result in e.g. of someone evils with magic power migrates ...and there you’ve just got another arch.