Review Detail of JulianneDragonhope in Returning from the Immortal World

Many mistakes while reading the story. Mostly grammatical but sometimes it's so bad that it makes the whole sentence have little to no meaning. So I give that a 2 star. Stability of updates...I'm giving that a 2 star too mostly due to the extra padding of useless junk they keep adding at the end of the chapter and also because it seems that no one checked if the port from GravityTales to Webnovel was okay or not. Story Development and Character Design, I'm giving both 1 star because there really isn't much of either. The MCs personality and such keeps getting contradicted so much that it makes me wonder if I should take the description of the MC by the author seriously. Side characters also are described in a way it seems like they'll have some personality to them but end up just bootlicking and scraping after the MC and become rather dull and similar. World background...nothing original really. It's also a 1 star because it's simply a mix of typical Xianxia with typical China. But on another note...I keep reading it. It's because of the tree sap.