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(rip my text accidentally deleted it. I'm talking about the sequel called super floating city. here's my rewrite the part about abyss domination.) I really liked this novel even thought I don't get the dnd combat system. the ending feels really rushed I really would like to see sauron fight asmodeus and defeat him and live happily ever after. (kinda happened I guest I wonder about his appearance on sequel could someone tell me about his appearance on sequel.) here's the things I kinda feel it could have more appearance on the novel. like become his companion,subordinate,friend,lover,allies. the dragon princess could have more appearance and help sauron and even potentially a lover. hes a loli dragon rip anyways. the girl with queen elizabeth bloodline named adelle. he could have some side stories you know about life of people of kingdom forgot name and some action about him having talks with nobles some fighting and his thoughts would have been better if it's someone else really hate that he almost gets no appearance after he get sent to the kingdom. and there's the girl that helped saulon the demonized body named xiang forgot name but I know first world is xiang he's a girl who forgot everything when he wakes up but remembers the name that demonized sauron have him km really sad about what happens to him from what I read he got killed by the lord of the arena?? go to novel update and check the comments about this novel his do called subordinate god the maiden of pain?? don't get appearance at all other than getting mentioned the halfling is in mordor I think in a tavern dancing and there's so much content that this novel can show yet the author probably isn't too much 3e guy ??? I don't play dnd thoe and the orc invasion could have more content man and I'm gone mention omg this thing s I'm gonna mention the sequel named super floating city now you're wondering how did I complete this novel it's because of machine translation stuff there's aperently 10 post script based on novel update while I only read 3 Im sure there's 10 because it's feels uncompleted the post scri** uncompleted I'm going to sleep now because I have a class today it's 12:00 now here I'm gonna continue this I dunno tommorow

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Abyss Domination

Eminent Student Of Buddha

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