Pretty interesting premise. The MC is not op right way, there is a pretty progression, doesn't seem forced But FOR FUCKS SAKE, STOP DUMPING USELESS INFORMATION EVERYWHERE. IF IT IS ANYWAY USEFUL FOR THE STORY TO ADVANCE ALRIGHT BUT STOP TALKING ABOUT BRUCE LEE AND NAPOLEON FFFFSSSS
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