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Soawn
SoawnLv54yrSoawn

Water. Water. One water. 20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering. Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions. The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel. And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for? From the pros, MC. Nice world. But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.

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Abyss Domination

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Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15Jack_N_Mikhail

GG! Many thanks for your honest review my friend. I thought that this could be a great novel from the synopsis. But now I have lowered my expectations to way below sea level (like ten thousand feet below) 😅 The lower the expectations, the lower the disappointments😋

AndreasAlexander
AndreasAlexanderLv6AndreasAlexander

thankyou for ur review. save mytime

MiguelWN
MiguelWNLv15MiguelWN

Thanks man. Saved time for me

Rober611
Rober611Lv6Rober611

Thanks for your review.

LOL_I_rape_lolis
LOL_I_rape_lolisLv5LOL_I_rape_lolis

Thanks bro saved me time

LOL_I_rape_lolis
LOL_I_rape_lolisLv5LOL_I_rape_lolis

Thanks bro saved me time

damn_it
damn_itLv11damn_it

Well I guess I’m not reading this then

bts_girl
bts_girlLv3bts_girl

Agreed

MonkeyWithoutaTail
MonkeyWithoutaTailLv4MonkeyWithoutaTail

sadly i didnt read your review before checking the guide to DND...

Nick_Mc
Nick_McLv11Nick_Mc

Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.

MatGeper
MatGeperLv10MatGeper

Agree my friend, this isnt story but a lot of data, and i really regretably not to read your comment, my mistake

MatGeper
MatGeperLv10MatGeper

Agree my friend, this isnt story but a lot of data, and i really regretably not to read your comment, my mistake

aMidzy
aMidzyLv10aMidzy

xD

aMidzy
aMidzyLv10aMidzy

xD

Fatty_Cream
Fatty_CreamLv5Fatty_Cream

Even though i really like this story, and i enjoy it. I found myself reading an entire chapter that was like 5 paragraphs of irrelevant bull**** before the plot progressed and then the chapter ended. Sometimes less is better in some cases. And i agree with this

Feliprins1
Feliprins1Lv14Feliprins1

The plot makes it still be good enough to be honest... and if you like DnD you can see alot of effort into making this novel, it suffers from overexposition but the characters and descriptions are always so good and on point. The characters feel alive and care about life and the world around them to some point (Incredible feat for a chinese novel) the emotions are strong and powerful and it makes everything relevant, even with all the information dumbs you can see Soran worry about it deeply to make sure he wont get unto a wrong path or be careless, its information that comes with relevance even when its too detailed.

SidheFire
SidheFireLv15SidheFire

GG, my friend well said indeed.

Nick_Mc:Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.
ReadingAlchemist
ReadingAlchemistLv11ReadingAlchemist

True

Vladarius
VladariusLv5Vladarius

maybe it more of a Balzacian writing and people dont usually like getting lots of descriptions of tiny details and items, sometimes people get bored of reading it too since it puts so much emphasis on describing small and minute things like items, history, the present world, the places they stay in, the road they are walking etc. im sure it can be exhausting to read so many details and descriptions even to a fond reader.

Soawn
SoawnLv5Soawn

I read 200 chapters. On another site. Even before appearing on this. And your 90 is just the beginning of suffering. After 200 chapters, everything is the same. Descriptions, descriptions, descriptions ......... +20-50 chapters. Again, the same description and Plot where they will apply the skill described twice, introduce them to the race and so on. I have an Alzheimer? Why so much unnecessary description?

Nick_Mc:Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.