Water. Water. One water. 20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering. Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions. The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel. And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for? From the pros, MC. Nice world. But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.
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GG! Many thanks for your honest review my friend. I thought that this could be a great novel from the synopsis. But now I have lowered my expectations to way below sea level (like ten thousand feet below) 😅 The lower the expectations, the lower the disappointments😋
thankyou for ur review. save mytime
Thanks man. Saved time for me
Thanks for your review.
Thanks bro saved me time
Thanks bro saved me time
Well I guess I’m not reading this then
Agreed
sadly i didnt read your review before checking the guide to DND...
Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.
Agree my friend, this isnt story but a lot of data, and i really regretably not to read your comment, my mistake
Agree my friend, this isnt story but a lot of data, and i really regretably not to read your comment, my mistake
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Even though i really like this story, and i enjoy it. I found myself reading an entire chapter that was like 5 paragraphs of irrelevant bull**** before the plot progressed and then the chapter ended. Sometimes less is better in some cases. And i agree with this
The plot makes it still be good enough to be honest... and if you like DnD you can see alot of effort into making this novel, it suffers from overexposition but the characters and descriptions are always so good and on point. The characters feel alive and care about life and the world around them to some point (Incredible feat for a chinese novel) the emotions are strong and powerful and it makes everything relevant, even with all the information dumbs you can see Soran worry about it deeply to make sure he wont get unto a wrong path or be careless, its information that comes with relevance even when its too detailed.
GG, my friend well said indeed.
Nick_Mc:Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.
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maybe it more of a Balzacian writing and people dont usually like getting lots of descriptions of tiny details and items, sometimes people get bored of reading it too since it puts so much emphasis on describing small and minute things like items, history, the present world, the places they stay in, the road they are walking etc. im sure it can be exhausting to read so many details and descriptions even to a fond reader.
I read 200 chapters. On another site. Even before appearing on this. And your 90 is just the beginning of suffering. After 200 chapters, everything is the same. Descriptions, descriptions, descriptions ......... +20-50 chapters. Again, the same description and Plot where they will apply the skill described twice, introduce them to the race and so on. I have an Alzheimer? Why so much unnecessary description?
Nick_Mc:Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.
