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Soawn
SoawnLv55yr
2019-09-09 18:39

Water. Water. One water. 20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering. Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions. The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel. And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for? From the pros, MC. Nice world. But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.

Abyss Domination

Eminent Student Of Buddha
4.3
530 Chs

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Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15

GG! Many thanks for your honest review my friend. I thought that this could be a great novel from the synopsis. But now I have lowered my expectations to way below sea level (like ten thousand feet below) 😅 The lower the expectations, the lower the disappointments😋

5yr
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AndreasAlexander
AndreasAlexanderLv6

thankyou for ur review. save mytime

5yr
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MiguelWN
MiguelWNLv15

Thanks man. Saved time for me

5yr
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Rober611
Rober611Lv6

Thanks for your review.

5yr
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LOL_I_rape_lolis
LOL_I_rape_lolisLv5

Thanks bro saved me time

5yr
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LOL_I_rape_lolis
LOL_I_rape_lolisLv5

Thanks bro saved me time

5yr
damn_it
damn_itLv11

Well I guess I’m not reading this then

5yr
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bts_girl
bts_girlLv3

Agreed

5yr
MonkeyWithoutaTail
MonkeyWithoutaTailLv4

sadly i didnt read your review before checking the guide to DND...

5yr
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Nick_Mc
Nick_McLv11

Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.

5yr
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sBFs
sBFsLv11

Agree my friend, this isnt story but a lot of data, and i really regretably not to read your comment, my mistake

5yr
sBFs
sBFsLv11

Agree my friend, this isnt story but a lot of data, and i really regretably not to read your comment, my mistake

5yr
aMidzy
aMidzyLv10

xD

5yr
aMidzy
aMidzyLv10

xD

5yr
Fatty_Cream
Fatty_CreamLv5

Even though i really like this story, and i enjoy it. I found myself reading an entire chapter that was like 5 paragraphs of irrelevant bull**** before the plot progressed and then the chapter ended. Sometimes less is better in some cases. And i agree with this

5yr
Feliprins1
Feliprins1Lv15

The plot makes it still be good enough to be honest... and if you like DnD you can see alot of effort into making this novel, it suffers from overexposition but the characters and descriptions are always so good and on point. The characters feel alive and care about life and the world around them to some point (Incredible feat for a chinese novel) the emotions are strong and powerful and it makes everything relevant, even with all the information dumbs you can see Soran worry about it deeply to make sure he wont get unto a wrong path or be careless, its information that comes with relevance even when its too detailed.

5yr
4
SidheFire
SidheFireLv15

GG, my friend well said indeed.

Nick_Mc:Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.
5yr
ReadingAlchemist
ReadingAlchemistLv11

True

4yr
Vladarius
VladariusLv5

maybe it more of a Balzacian writing and people dont usually like getting lots of descriptions of tiny details and items, sometimes people get bored of reading it too since it puts so much emphasis on describing small and minute things like items, history, the present world, the places they stay in, the road they are walking etc. im sure it can be exhausting to read so many details and descriptions even to a fond reader.

4yr
Soawn
SoawnLv5

I read 200 chapters. On another site. Even before appearing on this. And your 90 is just the beginning of suffering. After 200 chapters, everything is the same. Descriptions, descriptions, descriptions ......... +20-50 chapters. Again, the same description and Plot where they will apply the skill described twice, introduce them to the race and so on. I have an Alzheimer? Why so much unnecessary description?

Nick_Mc:Saved your time my ass, this is one of the best LITRPG novels, you read 4 chapters, I have read 90. I and hyper of critical of many novels on this sight. This novel was originally translated by Salty. It had a very very loyal following, and the plot in this novel is amazing. This novel is simular to Night Ranger, it is not like RSSG, or other MMO novels. Don't review if your not going to read the first 20 chapters.
4yr
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FangMing
FangMingLv5

For new readers who don't know, this novel translates into GravityTales until chapter 96 TOTALLY FREE! Webnovel seriously ... If I am personally going to read and pay for the chapters (not the 96 that are already free and here they are charging) instead of chapter 97 onwards, before that I will not pay anything. I feel sorry for GravityTales because the chapters chapters are a copy and paste of their translation and I feel disgusted with Webnovel, not for stopping the translation of the novel in GravityTales but for taking someone else's work to copy their work and paste it disgustingly while it is free elsewhere, they will charge for those chapters (5 or 6 SS minimum) You know, go to GravityTales, read until Chapter 96 for free and, if you like it, continue from 97 onwards, I don't think there is a reason to do so since they had at least a week to translate Chapter 97 into less

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Lebensohl
LebensohlLv15

I way prefer the whole VRMMO but now is a real world over the standard "VRMMO but go back 2 years". The whole 'this company spent millions designing content for only one player to get' or 'unfair advantages for the first player' or 'secret systems that no of the other millions of players think of' just are dumb. People aren't that stupid, and I appreciate it when an author doesn't lower the IQ of humanity by 100 points so their main character can dominate.

5yr
GDendro
GDendroLv15

Personally, I find this novel a really fun read but it might not be everyone’s cup of tea. The author goes into a lot of detail about just about everything, especially with regards to the D&D type leveling system which some readers may find tedious. On the other hand it has an interesting main character who doesn’t always use having played the game before to solve all his problems and instead has to make plans ahead of time to succeed, an interesting world and story reminiscent of Night Ranger, and some cool side characters to flesh things out. I suggest giving it a try!

5yr
SaltyTank
SaltyTankTranslator

I'm not sure if anyone remembers me, but I am SaltyTank, the original translator of AD back on Gravity Tales. I have read a few of the comments that seem to bash QI for copying my chapters and making them premium while they are completely free on GT, and thus I would like to give my opinion on what they are doing. Before I continue, do note that I willingly passed over the novel to the current translator and left QI for many reasons that have already been explained on my GT post. QI has all the rights to my chapters (at least up to c90), so technically they're not stealing because I was paid for my work. The only grey area would be c91-96 because I posted them after my GT contract expired and wasn't paid for the work, but the chapters were still copied over (with very minor edits) to QI. I honestly couldn't care less at this point and I would have handed them over anyways if they asked. Regarding the chapters being free on GT, I believe QI was supposed to take down the novel on GT once it hits the QI library, but apparently they couldn't be bothered to do it for some reason. So yes, enjoy the free chapters while it lasts, you never know when they will go down ;) Anyways, that's all I have to say. I'm sure more chapters are on the way, and hope you all enjoy the series even though I no longer work on it. (I'm not a big fan of the premium chapters either welp)

5yr
Tahes
TahesLv13

One of the better written stories written in its genre. Positives 1) Solid MC, who readers can related to on a human level. 2) Good side characters that are interesting and bring more to the story 3) Cute Sister who really helps drive the story, while also giving agency for the MC 4) Interesting World, and world building. 5) Cool battle and fights scenes, and nothing to over top. 6) Bad guys actually make sense, and some cool villans throughout the series. I was sad when this was originally dropped by the first TLer. Hope this catches up soon GL and bless the new/current TL team. Now all I want is someone to pick up Pursuing Immorality, and bring back the masterpiece...

5yr
JewCat
JewCatLv11

Very similar to night ranger. Characters aren't always the best but it makes up for it with great action and pretty good world design. Other thing that I love is that it has a d&d based leveling system. Overall pretty good.

5yr
algrife93
algrife93Lv15

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Gigatony
GigatonyLv4

Way, WAY too much world building. I don't need to know every details about every creatures, classes, damage formulas and the world as a whole that are taking over 3/4 of each the chapters which are often repeated in multiple chapters. Sorry, i really tried but it is making it unreadable for me.

5yr
Trafford
TraffordLv6

Will this be picked again? Contrary to garbage novels that are translated nowadays, such good novel like this was dropped... shame; please pick it up...

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