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NewDynasty
NewDynastyLv25yrNewDynasty

The grammar could be better, and the writing could be more formatted. You can tell that the author tried hard to write this. I assume that English isn't the author's native language, so it is quite commendable that he/she tried their hand at writing a novel in a language that isn't their native language. However, I suggest putting it through an online grammar tool or something like that to improve the flow/grammar.

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Cross- Roads:- What to choose love or friendship

Priyajha

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NewDynasty
NewDynastyLv2NewDynasty

Also, please capitalize your title properly.

Priyajha
PriyajhaAuthorPriyajha

Thank u for ur suggestions and you are right English is not my native language and while writing next chapter I'll keep everything u said about my writing in mind and try to improve things for better 😊

lighthearted
lightheartedLv5lighthearted

I think she has done a great job and she continues to though u have some valid points.