Do not ignore the fact that I five starred my own novel. Hello people Any ideas you guys want to include just comment it here. I might pick it and put in the story, remember I said ”MIGHT”

Pls update more chapter!!! Can't wait to read next chapter.......... .........................................................................................

Pls update more chapter!! Cant wait to read more chapter.. ...............................................................................................

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Novel is nearly trash, it's extremely badly translated, it's a weaboo mess, the MC get op for no real reason, he doesn't even have a real goal, there nothing more cliché, seriously i can't find one good point.

Umm............. Good luck......

This barely counts as a story, there is no plot, no character development and world development, writing quality is the golden standard for webnovel so it wouldn't pass on other sites like the hive of mediocre sjw's that is FF.net. The name for this should be changed to Training: The Montage. 'cause that's all there is to this,, fk he rarely uses the damned system this fic is named after.

The story is very decent so far so I recommend reading it however you're going to be pest with the status pages that are mixed into the chapters in the middle or the beginning of the chapters which makes his chapters Shorter and unfeeling I mean it's not like I hate the story I gave it 4 stars but I'm not going any higher 4 stars is already generous if hes gonna put the status pages in the beginning or middle I'm just gonna stop reading because this is absolute ****en ridiculous All status pages should be at the bottom and not be counted towards the chapter count. Have the main character turn off the notifications and check them after a fight after your story of the chapter is done because I am will drop this story if that happens again. That is something you don't do I look forward to reading a full chapter I don't wanna ****en read his entire status is line by line and then have maybe half a paragraph Up story do that again I'm dropping story no ifs no ands no but I will rate your story to ****

So good this is probably the best thing I’ve read on here and I’ve been around the writing style from the Beginning to end is the best and I love how he just keeps getting stronger

A história é super rasa, os personagens não são desenvolvidos, felizmente ou infelizmente o MC fica forte muito rápido. A história tinha tudo para dar certo, mas meeeeeh.