Review Detail of Nightrow in Mistress Of Dimension

It's not that bad, honestly, it's just that Eileen's character is quite forced and really unrealistic. Why would a 400+ old archewitch work for some militaristic group? If she's as strong or as it has been implied, stronger than her sister why would she held bsck so much? Anyways, the character is inconsistent and full of flaws. The fanfic is still interesting though.