Review Detail of Laurendil in Reborn in the Narutoverse

The story is extremely promising. It has good background, an OP MC and I love how he is able to blend in well to the Naruto Universe storyline. I truly do enjoy the novel and how it is developing. Having said that, however... the enjoyment is marred by the quality of the writing. It isn't the grammar - though there are some errors, it is negligible. What makes it a pain is that the author tends to have has a extremely long sentences. It is like a person who is telling you their life story in one breath. Breaking it down to several sentences would make it much easier to read and more enjoyable. One would not then need to , slow down and re-read some sentences just to understand them. You CAN have a long sentence but not when it looks like a whole mass of words and ideas joined together.