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sanguine
sanguineLv65yrsanguine

At first I really enjoyed this novel because it was unique and stuff with the new bloodline and dojutsu but then it turned into "let's change the story of naruto but show him with someone else's perspective" Really disappointing

Reborn in the Narutoverse

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Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5Inmortal_Dog

Es un fanfic, no la misma historia de naruto, un fanfic, si no quieres que cambie el flujo de la historia, porque mejor no te pones a ver naruto de nuevo, si es que lo has visto claro. Oh que quieres que haga el protagonista que no viva como quiera solo para no generar efectos mariposa, ahh porque encuentro bastante gente como tu en webnovel, no entiendo.

Zhelander
ZhelanderLv4Zhelander

You dont understand what he's saying, he speaks of how at first the story was about aaron doing things(star villague, going to konoha and being the heir to the clan) and later it changued to Naruto but from the perspective of Aaron(giving naruto the namikaze legacy, going to wave, helping him save hinata etc), it's like instead of a mc doing things we are watching naruto do everything but from Aaron perspective

Inmortal_Dog:Es un fanfic, no la misma historia de naruto, un fanfic, si no quieres que cambie el flujo de la historia, porque mejor no te pones a ver naruto de nuevo, si es que lo has visto claro. Oh que quieres que haga el protagonista que no viva como quiera solo para no generar efectos mariposa, ahh porque encuentro bastante gente como tu en webnovel, no entiendo.
Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5Inmortal_Dog

En eso tienes razon, deberia el autor protagonizar al mc y contar lo que hace, en vez de narrar mas la vida de los personajes secundarios.

Zhelander:You dont understand what he's saying, he speaks of how at first the story was about aaron doing things(star villague, going to konoha and being the heir to the clan) and later it changued to Naruto but from the perspective of Aaron(giving naruto the namikaze legacy, going to wave, helping him save hinata etc), it's like instead of a mc doing things we are watching naruto do everything but from Aaron perspective
Kermit_the_Frog
Kermit_the_FrogLv13Kermit_the_Frog

Si entiende ingles porque habla en español?

Inmortal_Dog:En eso tienes razon, deberia el autor protagonizar al mc y contar lo que hace, en vez de narrar mas la vida de los personajes secundarios.
Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5Inmortal_Dog

I'm sorry, my first language is Spanish and it makes me faster to write, but from now on I'll write in English because I realize that it bothers a lot of people.

Kermit_the_Frog:Si entiende ingles porque habla en español?
loner_rain_daoist
loner_rain_daoistLv4loner_rain_daoist

man it's good to make a Fanfic, but will be terrible if you kill Obito before of try to destroy Konoha with the Kyubi, will change all of the work and universe, or if you take the Kyubi from baby naruto, will have much incongruence with the normal work.

Inmortal_Dog:I'm sorry, my first language is Spanish and it makes me faster to write, but from now on I'll write in English because I realize that it bothers a lot of people.
Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5Inmortal_Dog

That's the great thing about fanfictions, you can do whatever you want with the universe.

loner_rain_daoist:man it's good to make a Fanfic, but will be terrible if you kill Obito before of try to destroy Konoha with the Kyubi, will change all of the work and universe, or if you take the Kyubi from baby naruto, will have much incongruence with the normal work.
loner_rain_daoist
loner_rain_daoistLv4loner_rain_daoist

well but that it's for satisfaction and only for that, more people will fell weird to see thee thing's go wild, like if in Game of thrones you kill all the Starck's at the begining? will be pretty weird, only if you are a master to the same height of Martin if not it's only crap.

Inmortal_Dog:That's the great thing about fanfictions, you can do whatever you want with the universe.
BigBangOrko
BigBangOrkoLv13BigBangOrko

You are right in saying that the story of Naruto is being shown by someone else's perspective but can you really create a new story without touching the original MC. I mean how much of a new story can you create without touching Naruto, the whole manga is based on him and people directly or indirectly connected to him, plus the character created by this authority is born at similar time as Naruto, so it's more hard not to touch Naruto. 🤔🤔😉

sanguine
sanguineLv6sanguine

The mc gives me a feeling as if he was create to highlight the story of naruto

BigBangOrko:You are right in saying that the story of Naruto is being shown by someone else's perspective but can you really create a new story without touching the original MC. I mean how much of a new story can you create without touching Naruto, the whole manga is based on him and people directly or indirectly connected to him, plus the character created by this authority is born at similar time as Naruto, so it's more hard not to touch Naruto. 🤔🤔😉
Pripriri
PripririLv5Pripriri

I AGREE. MC IS STUPID