Review Detail of Lololollolo in The World of Demons And Gods

I dunno what to say... But it has a good start. The author seems insecure to us readers? Anyway, for me its already to early for me to review this novel. The type of this novel is very different than most wuxia 'cause this one have a point of view which is rare or non existent at all that I had read (Wuxia or Xianxia) novels. The chapter 1 and 2 can be already info dump, but it tackles how the world works. I guess that's okay? I had already read this in Royal Road and Wattpad, but this is mostly updated story so far, the author changed every chapter! And much better than before. Note to everyone, he admits that he has slow update rate. But for me, its enjoyable to read his works.