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Sovereign_of_Books
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So yeah, I voted for this novel and have read up to 18 chapters. I had a high expectation, and from what I've read, it's too high, but it's not bad. This internet Cafe thing, I was expecting a literal internet Cafe, like both game, but also the Cafe part. As of now, all we're getting is the same Resident Evil gameplay, it's so repeated and boring. It could really improve, since I'm writing this at night, let me just summarize everything that need to improve/can be different. Characters: Pretty bland, they're either not rich, rich, or kinda rich. There's girls and boys, but the only way to differentiate them is that one is pretty and screams a lot, the other is rich and screams less. The Mc is bland as well, there's nothing to his character at all. World Building: I remember how many people said that this is similar to gourmet of another world and I don't see it. Gourmet of another world had a pretty good and solid world building, this novel (and I mean Gourmet of another world from chapter 1 to chapter 18, comparing it to this novel from chapter 1 to 18) is so boring. All we know is that there's a school. A few shops that aren't very popular. We know the country's name and the capital as well, and yeah... That's all. Story development: Probably the worst that this novel does, it's just new people entering the Cafe, threathing the owner, gets tricked to play, says "if I don't like it, I get a refund", screams, starts loving the game, comes back for more, basically throwing their money at the Mc. That isn't plot. It's just a few isekai CNs into one gameplay novel. But that's just a theory, a Resident Evil theory. Thanks for reading.

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Stalwart
StalwartLv4Stalwart

Well the story is now going through a parental lock arc where people are trying to prevent the cafe's business and trying to close it down on the pretense that games are addictive which is fair as they are even skipping school but in reality it's the plot of a bunch of business typhoons wanting to shut down a massive competitor

Sundari_Yadav
Sundari_YadavLv3Sundari_Yadav

👍🏻

Stalwart:Well the story is now going through a parental lock arc where people are trying to prevent the cafe's business and trying to close it down on the pretense that games are addictive which is fair as they are even skipping school but in reality it's the plot of a bunch of business typhoons wanting to shut down a massive competitor
Sovereign_of_Books
Sovereign_of_BooksLv6Sovereign_of_Books

Yeah, I know, I've read more, almost reached chapter 100 I think, it's gotten a bit better but it's still not that good

Stalwart:Well the story is now going through a parental lock arc where people are trying to prevent the cafe's business and trying to close it down on the pretense that games are addictive which is fair as they are even skipping school but in reality it's the plot of a bunch of business typhoons wanting to shut down a massive competitor
koala1of2the3abyss
koala1of2the3abyssLv5koala1of2the3abyss

I recommend my house of horror, of course not suitable for scared people.

Sovereign_of_Books
Sovereign_of_BooksLv6Sovereign_of_Books

Hihi, fools on you, I’m already reading it. And don’t recommend LOM, I've been reading it for a year. Pick something else!

koala1of2the3abyss:I recommend my house of horror, of course not suitable for scared people.