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ledski
ledskiLv134yrledski

To tell the truth i have no idea why the hell this novel is so high rated. At this point i'm only reading because i've got nothing better to do, and kingdom building novels are my guilty pleasure. So far the MC is basically your general japanese novel MC. Dumb, full of righteousness, a total pushover, a king of virgins and of course, having no dignity whatsoever. There are many inaccurate facts in the novel and the author constantly leaves plotholes. It is pretty clear at this point that sometimes he tries to fix an absurdity in the next chapter motivated by full blown criticism from the readers, but that doesn't always happens. If you want to read a novel where you can witness all that, be my guest.

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World Domination System

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HarRai
HarRaiLv4HarRai

Why is it so highly rated?because and insecure author removes all the posts with lower ratings.

HarRai
HarRaiLv4HarRai

Why is it so highly rated?because and insecure author removes all the posts with lower ratings.

ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5ArashiTenebris

that one big pile of assuming there, nearly half of what you saying is either wrong or haven't read enough chapter no, this aren't typical mc who just murder anyone who just 'offende' him, and no, this isn't typical woman in other xianxia novel,.... (and you forgot one thing, the mc isn't perfect, but he do learn, and become more mature later, the problem is it a bit slow so you get a impression that it just 2D like that, and patience, man, most of the 'plot hole' do get resolved in either a few chapter later, or at most is 20 to 50 chapter later, and it legit enough there) if you guy want more clear answer, just check on the author discord for answer, you can ask other reader and athor there, and don't worry about so much bias, the author do willing do say the bad part of his novel, and fine if the reader feel like don't want to read his novel if it the legit reason there, you can check this discord link https://discord.gg/vRTpV7B

berxeq
berxeqLv5berxeq

bruh please write your defense after taking out the author's schlong out of your mouth .

ArashiTenebris:that one big pile of assuming there, nearly half of what you saying is either wrong or haven't read enough chapter no, this aren't typical mc who just murder anyone who just 'offende' him, and no, this isn't typical woman in other xianxia novel,.... (and you forgot one thing, the mc isn't perfect, but he do learn, and become more mature later, the problem is it a bit slow so you get a impression that it just 2D like that, and patience, man, most of the 'plot hole' do get resolved in either a few chapter later, or at most is 20 to 50 chapter later, and it legit enough there) if you guy want more clear answer, just check on the author discord for answer, you can ask other reader and athor there, and don't worry about so much bias, the author do willing do say the bad part of his novel, and fine if the reader feel like don't want to read his novel if it the legit reason there, you can check this discord link https://discord.gg/vRTpV7B
ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5ArashiTenebris

Don't worry, because what I said was mostly the truth anyway (at least unlike those who just bias in either full negative or positive, I at least try to provide both to what I know so far, though I may miss some part), and the discord part for the author though, if you did check in and notice not much active in it currently though, then you do have reason to doubt, for some reason the author become less active and the server become that silent for more than half a yeah already, sadly. Just wondering, I already read to chapter 858, so which chapter you have read that you think my comment is wrong here ? (I don't mind constructive review, both pros and cons part, but if all you say is insult other without reason then I won't bother comment back anyway, so both of us don't have to waste time for it)

berxeq:bruh please write your defense after taking out the author's schlong out of your mouth .
berxeq
berxeqLv5berxeq

congrats bro , you had patience to read to 800 chapters . i could do most is 50 if it cant attract readers in early chapters whats the point ? if you want to make mc immature little sh*t why bother with transmigration shennanigans ? cause he's life experience doesnt show at all . and all the praise saying it doenst uses much plot armour ? bish please that system is plot armour enough , not to mention those convenient op side characters.

ArashiTenebris:Don't worry, because what I said was mostly the truth anyway (at least unlike those who just bias in either full negative or positive, I at least try to provide both to what I know so far, though I may miss some part), and the discord part for the author though, if you did check in and notice not much active in it currently though, then you do have reason to doubt, for some reason the author become less active and the server become that silent for more than half a yeah already, sadly. Just wondering, I already read to chapter 858, so which chapter you have read that you think my comment is wrong here ? (I don't mind constructive review, both pros and cons part, but if all you say is insult other without reason then I won't bother comment back anyway, so both of us don't have to waste time for it)
ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5ArashiTenebris

yup, guess you haven't reach to some certain arc then, beside the author are quite inexperience in early chapter/volume, so it fine if you don't want to continue reading since it your option anyway. Though if you want to find a reason to continue reading, then it do become better later though, just need enough patient for it, not all novel is perfect anyway, even some novel from Tolkien have his flaw (if I remember right, the first real highlight of this novel is chapter 80, and after volume 2, the mc become a king through plotting, and of course since you are still in 'really early stage' so it quite understandable that the mc are quite immature in some part, he do grow up later to be a damn good scheming though and do use his knowledge/experience, like how to scam other people, chapter 492 is where he no longer scheming in the dark and now do include with his few selected people to scheming with, where I don't think there are that many china mc who do though. And chapter 774 is where the mc do actually have a real quality to become a 'Dominator' here and not scheming all the time now, which I will quote in next comment for the context about system is plot armor part, it necessary though, beside later the mc become good enough to less rely on the system and only use it for some special job there, you should watch the youtube video name 'The Nature of Clichés - Honest Thoughts' for better idea, since cliches' is a tool after all, not all is bad, it just how the author use it the second highlight is the second arc, where the mc deal with the b*tch scheming elf queen, and outsmart her, that some detective stuff there, that hightlight arc is about chapter 166~181. I don't remember clearly which chapter in volume 3 since it quite long, but here are another highlight where the the mc receive the baptism of death [basically when the mc have to cope with his mistake that cause death to other] that one of the begin for him to begin grow up and do the necessary, even if it have to dirty his hand) it have been a long time so I may not remember other good part in volume 3, beside I'm not sure how far you will continue reading so this is just far enough chapter goal for you to give a try. If you reach near volume 4, then I will tell more since there are even more interesting/exiting stuff Have a nice day then

berxeq:congrats bro , you had patience to read to 800 chapters . i could do most is 50 if it cant attract readers in early chapters whats the point ? if you want to make mc immature little sh*t why bother with transmigration shennanigans ? cause he's life experience doesnt show at all . and all the praise saying it doenst uses much plot armour ? bish please that system is plot armour enough , not to mention those convenient op side characters.
Starvation
StarvationLv10Starvation

can you link the discord server ? Or where can i find it ? Yes, i thought the same at the beginining. The MC was quite annoying and it seemed like he didn't have life experience at all. It still seems that way at 330 chapters in, but overall it gets better. The highlight for me in the Black Raven Kingdom Ark was the safe* mechanism he instilled , since he didn't have a oath with Faxul

ArashiTenebris:yup, guess you haven't reach to some certain arc then, beside the author are quite inexperience in early chapter/volume, so it fine if you don't want to continue reading since it your option anyway. Though if you want to find a reason to continue reading, then it do become better later though, just need enough patient for it, not all novel is perfect anyway, even some novel from Tolkien have his flaw (if I remember right, the first real highlight of this novel is chapter 80, and after volume 2, the mc become a king through plotting, and of course since you are still in 'really early stage' so it quite understandable that the mc are quite immature in some part, he do grow up later to be a damn good scheming though and do use his knowledge/experience, like how to scam other people, chapter 492 is where he no longer scheming in the dark and now do include with his few selected people to scheming with, where I don't think there are that many china mc who do though. And chapter 774 is where the mc do actually have a real quality to become a 'Dominator' here and not scheming all the time now, which I will quote in next comment for the context about system is plot armor part, it necessary though, beside later the mc become good enough to less rely on the system and only use it for some special job there, you should watch the youtube video name 'The Nature of Clichés - Honest Thoughts' for better idea, since cliches' is a tool after all, not all is bad, it just how the author use it the second highlight is the second arc, where the mc deal with the b*tch scheming elf queen, and outsmart her, that some detective stuff there, that hightlight arc is about chapter 166~181. I don't remember clearly which chapter in volume 3 since it quite long, but here are another highlight where the the mc receive the baptism of death [basically when the mc have to cope with his mistake that cause death to other] that one of the begin for him to begin grow up and do the necessary, even if it have to dirty his hand) it have been a long time so I may not remember other good part in volume 3, beside I'm not sure how far you will continue reading so this is just far enough chapter goal for you to give a try. If you reach near volume 4, then I will tell more since there are even more interesting/exiting stuff Have a nice day then
ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5ArashiTenebris

Here is the discord link, though the problem is for some reason (at least for me) the author don't communicate as much anymore and the server are in a 'semi-dead' stage, where only few member (at most is 10~20 guy ?) are still active there now, not sure if the author do make new discord server for his new book that continue this novle there ? (slight spoiler, it about the mc in the main land), since he just stop talk to us suddenly, maybe he still talk and take feedback on the novel chapter, but on discord it seem he stopped (and about the mc in the novel, yeah, he a bit like you say, but it become better and more later chapter he reflect himself more to become better, even come to term with his past when it appeared, unlike most isekai novel where they just simply forget the mc previous world/past there) discord(dot)gg/vRTpV7B (remove the (dot) part with dot ' . ' there since this website keep censord any link)

Starvation:can you link the discord server ? Or where can i find it ? Yes, i thought the same at the beginining. The MC was quite annoying and it seemed like he didn't have life experience at all. It still seems that way at 330 chapters in, but overall it gets better. The highlight for me in the Black Raven Kingdom Ark was the safe* mechanism he instilled , since he didn't have a oath with Faxul
Starvation
StarvationLv10Starvation

Thank you !

ArashiTenebris:Here is the discord link, though the problem is for some reason (at least for me) the author don't communicate as much anymore and the server are in a 'semi-dead' stage, where only few member (at most is 10~20 guy ?) are still active there now, not sure if the author do make new discord server for his new book that continue this novle there ? (slight spoiler, it about the mc in the main land), since he just stop talk to us suddenly, maybe he still talk and take feedback on the novel chapter, but on discord it seem he stopped (and about the mc in the novel, yeah, he a bit like you say, but it become better and more later chapter he reflect himself more to become better, even come to term with his past when it appeared, unlike most isekai novel where they just simply forget the mc previous world/past there) discord(dot)gg/vRTpV7B (remove the (dot) part with dot ' . ' there since this website keep censord any link)