Review Detail of KillerHemboy in World Domination System
Review detail
Author here, finally writing a self review to promote my novel. This is my second book, and I must say I am finding it more and more fun to write and make the stories in my head come alive for you. Unlike my first which had an uneven pace in the beginning, this one is has been written with all the experience I have accumulated. I always wanted a book like Release That Witch where there would be awesome kingdom building along with the MC also being OP. And a system makes everything much more fun of course. So I started this novel. I am really humbled by the great response and will continue to be stable and steady with my writing and release frequency. This novel, like my first one, is also planned out to have a definite end, so it will not be dropped. Thanks for reading both this review and the novel, and I hope you continue to follow my novels. Cheers! Author out!
World Domination System
KillerHemboy
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The chapter got deleted by mistake and got reposted an hour later....so the link is different. So please go back to the previous chapter and you can get to the next one :D
rolfzx:What happen T__T This chapter has been deleted. Please go to The World Domination System or Webnovel home
LionWannabe:WOW, the best original novel I've ever seen. stable pace, great story, and nice background + system. i think you should bring some romance to him, to push him more, encourage him to be stronger and stronger. overall its nice to have some romance development, and become strong together.
Juto:Thanks for the effort, cannot wait to start this journey to see how this novel turns out.
hey author, since this site is quite limited so I can only send this bellow, if you want for more, PM me at royalroadl (name "royaldarknes") I have some writing information I like to share with you here (this is only for research to improve, not mean to force you to write in a certain way) (I do sometimes update new material and tips here including in the comment of the post, there are new material near the end of my first post, it have #NEW tag with it ) https://***.royalroadl.com/forums/thread/98644 (this give advice on how "not" to write here, and how to use Cliche right, it also have other good videos like when to "tell" and when to "show" ) (and yes,I send this to multiple author ,mostly the new and inexperienced author or the one who haven't know some of the convenient tool in my post [sorry,not try to be arrogant],if you think the link is fake then check my post that at page 1 of the "Assistance Request" part of forum in royalroadl)
KillerHemboy:Thank you! Hope you are loving it!
Chaotic_Winter:Can you say the genre of the novel, ex: action, advection, harem, romance etc...????
feedback from chapter 30: This is because traces of high-quality Ether had been detected on the thieves at the time that they interacted with host. This was not detected before due to the absence of the module.] (Do not see the logic) It's like a hero met a thief and killed him. A year later he found a device detecting eavesdropping bugs. And with the help of it discovered that the thief whom he killed a year ago (and whose corpse had already floated down the river) had on himself a listening bug... Although the situation in the chapter is even more implausible. The author is too lazy to explain the situation, I will prompt a variant. (Ether had been detected on the map left after the thieves) But this will have consequences. Ether trace will remain on things for months and this should be taken into account in the future plot. And do not conflict with the previous explanation about the absorption by the land of used ether.
KillerHemboy:Action, adventure and Kingdom Building with no harem
ArashiTenebris:hey author, since this site is quite limited so I can only send this bellow, if you want for more, PM me at royalroadl (name "royaldarknes") I have some writing information I like to share with you here (this is only for research to improve, not mean to force you to write in a certain way) (I do sometimes update new material and tips here including in the comment of the post, there are new material near the end of my first post, it have #NEW tag with it ) https://***.royalroadl.com/forums/thread/98644 (this give advice on how "not" to write here, and how to use Cliche right, it also have other good videos like when to "tell" and when to "show" ) (and yes,I send this to multiple author ,mostly the new and inexperienced author or the one who haven't know some of the convenient tool in my post [sorry,not try to be arrogant],if you think the link is fake then check my post that at page 1 of the "Assistance Request" part of forum in royalroadl)
oh and sorry about the link to my post one, forgot that the link will not work on this site, instead, you can just google this and you will find my material post "royalroad Forum And Writing Directory for Authors "
KillerHemboy:Action, adventure and Kingdom Building with no harem