Review Detail of Yi_Xi in Legend of Fuyao

Hi everybody. I've ready this story a year ago and I remembered liking it very much. After reading this one I'm not so sure... so I decided to read this story from the past translator. Lo and behold I found out that what bugging me in this story was the prose. Each sentencr doesnt fit with the next one so the readers will feel confused at the end lmao. I recommend trying the trackest's translation in ********** forum.