There are things i like about this story and others I really don't like. Despite being modeled after your basic Wuxia novel, I like that AGB has a unique world with a pretty cool cultivation system, However, my biggest gripe is with the MC. He's apparently 6 years old and thinks, talks and acts like an ***** but you've given no explanation for why that is. It's not like he's reincarnated. Also, the MC is plain dumb. He's made at least half a dozen bad decisions in first 5 chapters. All in all this would be a much better read if the MC's character traits are ironed out.
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