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Review Detail of Rukan in Astral God Black

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Rukan
RukanLv25yrRukan

Very good chapter. I read them all and decided to small little review over the all for the time being. I must say you have very little grammar issues for a first time writer. In addition to fact these errors do barely anything to distract from the story. If you don't mind a proof reader I wouldn't kind helping you.

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Astral God Black

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Thanks for the review