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TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv106yr
2018-08-22 13:06

Chenglei and I want to die... I mean, COME ON!!! We are making a great book with little to no errors! And you're telling me that this is above us just because of it immediately having a harem and the protagonist is immediately OP? For ****'s sake, I get that English isn't his first language but I don't see it improving at all. The story is WAY too rushed! He becomes a dragon on chapter 20!? WTF is this? This is kinda like those Minecraft animations on Youtube but in ****ty quality. BUT YET It's on top trending...

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CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

don't question harems man just enjoy that they even put one in at least you know they are part of the sages of culture 1 star is kind of harsh im just happy there is a harem lol its so hard to find them I'm really happy to find another even if it was crap wich ill have to find out for myself lol

TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10

Still depressing

CliffkunLolRekt:don't question harems man just enjoy that they even put one in at least you know they are part of the sages of culture 1 star is kind of harsh im just happy there is a harem lol its so hard to find them I'm really happy to find another even if it was crap wich ill have to find out for myself lol
Chenglei
ChengleiLv11

Oh shet I just noticed this Review xD

Chenglei
ChengleiLv11

I don't Know tbh?? I dont want to be rude, but you are kind of right. *Sigh...* More to my depression i guess.

Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5

... harems arnt something one can enjoy... its like the male version of a female slut... a manwhore... he goes running about humping legs like a unfixed dog... it ruins a mc if all they do is act shameless then hump the nearest leg to get off

CliffkunLolRekt:don't question harems man just enjoy that they even put one in at least you know they are part of the sages of culture 1 star is kind of harsh im just happy there is a harem lol its so hard to find them I'm really happy to find another even if it was crap wich ill have to find out for myself lol
Aagnus
AagnusLv14

Look at this shameless pricks doing here. HAHAHAHAHA... HEY!!! Your fcking 3months is too long!!!!

TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv10

... I wrote this a month ago.Why the hell are you screeching at me when I wasn't the one who decided the 3-month break?

Aagnus:Look at this shameless pricks doing here. HAHAHAHAHA... HEY!!! Your fcking 3months is too long!!!!
Aagnus
AagnusLv14

Because I'm the leader of the GREAT BASHER SECT!!!

TheGentlemenWorld:... I wrote this a month ago.Why the hell are you screeching at me when I wasn't the one who decided the 3-month break?
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