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BeyondBreaking
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Mehehehehehe, justice warrior strikes once more. Writing Quality 4/5 Good good, only peeve I have is the multiple usage of "???" on some of the occasions when reading. One is okay. Stability 5/5 "Better than mine." Mostly consistent and some of the breaks in the table of contents are compensated. Story Development 4/5 Story is good, thumbs up. No stereotypical themes and such. Character Design 3/5 This rating is kind of influenced by the story development. Kind of strange to include he's kind of bipolar. You kind of know what you're in for with his dark past and it's one sided. Maybe add like "My life is sh*t, but at least its not _____" World Background 3/5 I've only found small snippets of the world he is currently in but that's it, like the measure of power and some names included of some elitist group or something. Also anti Bee men is such a strange term. NOTE This is a review based only around 11 chapters. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Hope the author doesn't check the reply to this review

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BeyondBreaking
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Though my sense of justice has concurred you in the situation of being unable to receive a free of charge cover due to your negligence, on the eve of christmas (**T), You will receive thee a cover bought as a gift of compensation on your part trouble. Give me any specific things you want or I'll use the description you used on both of the thread when I ask for the commission.

BeyondBreaking
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Why did they censor Pacific Standard on Pacific Standard Time of **T

BeyondBreaking
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*When I pay for the submission

BeyondBreaking
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**commission Damn I suck

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KoejiSllycc
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Lmao, lol, what?