Review Detail of Doge3569 in Mr.Bee Violinist

The writing quality is occasionally inconsistent throughout the chapters. It might be great occasionally but it occasionally might be slightly bad because of some grammatical errors and sentence confusions. The stability of updates has yet to be determined because he has only posted a couple of chapter in a day but it seems to be quite good. Story development is gonna get sick bc I'm calling it XD. Also the main character has a bit of an inconsistency in personality. Might be good to some people might be not as well. The main character offs between loser and hero on and off throughout the first few chapters. Prob focus on that. For the world background try adding a slightly dystopian like world based on the medieval age and a mix of Japanese culture in it. Looking forward to the future of your novel. Salutations from this mister.