I hope you guys could leave comments below and give advice to further improve the story. You guys could also suggest thing to be added into the story. Critiques are extremely welcomed here. If there are grammar errors or need work areas please comment down so that i can fix them immediately. -Slyc
KoejiSllycc
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LIKEThe story itself is going to be full of tragedies and all that scheisse. I promise you, it's gonna be one of those cool slick endings (Heck, it might even be a sad ending as well)
Lonely_citizen:Is this going to be a tragedy
KoejiSllycc:The story itself is going to be full of tragedies and all that scheisse. I promise you, it's gonna be one of those cool slick endings (Heck, it might even be a sad ending as well)
DarkKnight32:Will there be romance but the girl needs to stay with him forever so no ntr ****...
Celestially_Mortal:Lightning Emperor? Lord Third?!? Ultimate Vexation?!? If you get what I mean!
Celestially_Mortal:Twilight's Anthem, the book title is great. I'm going to read it when it has many chapters. 😅
I gave your story a read, and the overall quality isn't bad. But I'm curious, how did your novel make it onto the trending list? Even though all my stats are higher and I'm in the top 50 yours is considered trending while mine is swept by the wayside TT_TT. Sorry if I've offended you. Please continue writing as your story is quite interesting. I'm just a bit frustrated~
I talked to edgarry about it, if you know him on the discord channel. Hehehe, If ya wanna get on trending, ya gotta cut the line. Otherwise, other people will beat ya to it.
Einlion:I gave your story a read, and the overall quality isn't bad. But I'm curious, how did your novel make it onto the trending list? Even though all my stats are higher and I'm in the top 50 yours is considered trending while mine is swept by the wayside TT_TT. Sorry if I've offended you. Please continue writing as your story is quite interesting. I'm just a bit frustrated~
KoejiSllycc:I talked to edgarry about it, if you know him on the discord channel. Hehehe, If ya wanna get on trending, ya gotta cut the line. Otherwise, other people will beat ya to it.
One night, Koeji Sllycc had a dumb but weird idea about some dumb novel. The result? This... but yeah, basically
Endless_Clouds:that led you to make a protagonist of half bee
KoejiSllycc:One night, Koeji Sllycc had a dumb but weird idea about some dumb novel. The result? This... but yeah, basically
There is a system, but it's not gonna show up immediately. The mc is not good, he is sort-of evil but sort-of good, but mostly evil.
HansTheCool:Is there a system and is the mc op good sir?
KoejiSllycc:There is a system, but it's not gonna show up immediately. The mc is not good, he is sort-of evil but sort-of good, but mostly evil.