So, will she actually end up with her husband? Because, I gotta tell you, he sucks. I hope he's not "the one" for her. He totally sucks. Forget about development of character, his past attitude and actions speaks more of his character. He sucks. Repleceable af. Surely, there's some other powerful man out there who will treat our mc right? Because the way you're going, it's like you're saying that if her husband falls in love with her, that's a happy ending. I hope not. I do like the way you write the mc tho and how she doesn't care for the husband at all. I hope her husband realizes that.
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LIKEIkr? Ughh maybe the husband will die or something. I mean, it's totally impossible but damn, I sure can still hope. He's already dead to me lol
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