Seems like you will work off the idea if you do please don’t do what the other author did and completely put the Hacking system into a useless position he changed the story massively and the hacking system pretty much isn’t even there anymore
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LIKETrSDTKW:Yea he pretty much kept the op stuff but semi sealed it for a new game system
TrSDTKW:Not sure I haven’t had any ideas lately I’ll decide this weekend if I end it
*need to put more effort in the writing and thinking department 1)Fuck you mc is idiotic retard 2)System is a let down 3)The Chloe girl needs to get the retribution you need to make her remember and make her jealous and sad for letting mc down or I'll curse your family that fukin mc has no dignity or something? 4) I didn't get a boner and I need it! make the Mc have a sexy gf and make that Chloe jealous 5) use the lottery for hack's sake 6) make him stop asking retarded question 7) give him sharingan kinda **** 9) get him out of that family and get him in a nice penthouse cause he has 5million now and next mission gives 10million also he doesn't need pills he can convert money into points and get better pills.... And also No **** genius he has money now and he needs a better secure place than staying with annoying family who takes rent and have a horrible women of a mother 10) nice story but please put more effort 11) make him hack something with his own effort like a super pro so he can show off in front of his darkweb friends 12) give him #lifehack like allucard or something 😂 13) currently he is a looser with no dignity and an unknown bitch