I like the story but the MC lies for ABSOLUTELY no good reason throughout the story, it doesn't even add to the story AT ALL it's just him keeping secrets with 0 justification like him hiding his fire martial arts from his friends with frankly ****ty excuses that can easily be seen through and just makes his team look like idiots but then they eventually find out AND NOTHING HAPPENS they don't react to it at all and he doesn't even explain why he hid it? There's also. a bunch of inconsistencies like Aries telling his sis his game name but she having no idea who tf he is even tho the dude becoming infamous. The penalty system and other little things could be done better but it's far too late now. While this ended up being a rant I do think that it's a genuinely good story if you can ignore the flaws.
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