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Review Detail of Tobil3rone in New Life Online

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Tobil3rone
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Hard to write a good novel if you can’t lay the foundation right. The story is boring and one dimensional. I would advise thinking about what you’re going to write before doing it. It’s just too confusing, and in not a good way. Disregarding that i good that you improve and become a better writer. Cheers

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Thank you so much for this review! And yes, I'll get there one day >_<