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scarletxstrifeLv135yrscarletxstrife

Well, the story and the characters are good but unfortunately, in my opinion, the novel suffers greatly as it has no main character. While the novel introduces Aries Kim as the MC for 100 chapters into the novel, it then introduces a bunch of side characters as the main characters. Which would be fine if the novel was described as a group of friends playing an online game with their own adventures but it didnt. Instead of having a main story line with one Mc, you are left with a bunch of side stories that you may not have wanted or stories from the POV of characters you dont care for as much while wondering what the Mc is doing or if he is doing anything at all. So while it is a good novel and better than self written novels, I hope the author would go back to how it was at the beginning.

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Thank you so much for the good review. Vol 1-6 are mostly introduction of the three main characters for the upcoming volumes as they have their own part till the end game. I hope you stay with the story till we get to that part. Have fun and if you have any questions or things you want to add, I'll be here.

scarletxstrife
scarletxstrifeLv13scarletxstrife

I am staying because it is still a good story. I am ok with having 3 Mc and their Pov but there are too many Povs. Some are from people i didnt remembering, some from people that arent developed enough to have their own side story, and some are a little confusing as it isnt stated which character pov we are reading. So just keep the pov to 3. Others can be added as a break from the main story.

arieskim:Thank you so much for the good review. Vol 1-6 are mostly introduction of the three main characters for the upcoming volumes as they have their own part till the end game. I hope you stay with the story till we get to that part. Have fun and if you have any questions or things you want to add, I'll be here.