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Review Detail of ThousandPageFist in VR World of Cultivation

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We do have a very interesting story here, going from games to cultivating directly. One of the only issues I found was in the loss of punctuation with run on sentences. Rob is interesting to follow but the character in game names is down right strange at times, for example one of his friends is called nohair as a joke and then it happens that he loses his hair. . . Ok. Very good story overall though and no overpowered or broken people yet. Good read can’t wait for more chapters.

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